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Title: Hard
Author: [ profile] hawkeyecat
Fandom: M*A*S*H
Claim: General Series
Character(s): Hawkeye Pierce, Trapper John McIntyre
Prompt: 034. Not Enough
Community: [ profile] fanfic100
Word Count: 118
Rating: Hard R
Disclaimer: Bobby wants to keep his priceless toys. I keep telling him to share, but does he listen?
Author's Notes: Beta-read by [ profile] sarcasticsra.

Need more, need skin and heat instead of harsh, unforgiving cloth. A rough push to pants and shorts, and you’re free to thrust into the smooth palm gripping you. Try to return the favor, and get a snort in return, hand shoved away, ‘cuz he’s got something else in mind, and one of those long fingers is probing you. Ready and you roll over, wanting more, needing it, and he’s in you, and it’s rough and fast and you love it more than you should when that nurse is waiting for you, when there’s a letter from your dad under your pillow when a picture of his daughters is next to his. Over, and you still want more.

Date: 2006-02-03 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I like this one best, though you really did a great job on all of them.

One, sheer pleasure takes you away, lets you be anyone in that white-hot instant of perfect nothingness, This line from Coping Mechanism reminds me of Hawkeye and his need to reinvent himself in an atempt to stay sane.

And, as an aside, Kudos to amazonqeenkate. Your Jesse Martin icon is delicious

Date: 2006-02-03 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you. I'm rather fond of this one myself.

Oh, perfect. That's pretty much what that line was supposed to evoke.

I'll pass that on. =)

Date: 2006-02-05 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
She failed to pass this on, for which I will mock her, but thank you. :)

Date: 2006-02-05 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
You're welcome.

Date: 2006-02-06 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Hmmm MASH fic. Slash. Good thing I found this fic LJ. Added you to the f-list by the way.

I will be back - like the Terminator said ;)


Date: 2006-02-06 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I'll add you back shortly. Glad you liked it.


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