ext_16524 ([identity profile] mijmeraar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rwryter 2006-02-01 11:31 am (UTC)

It reads like Hawkeye. You know?

frighteningly pretty bullets

Bang, bang, bang. I almost couldn't keep up. It just has that rushed, mind in sixteen places at once feeling. You can feel everything despite the shortness of the fic. And the last lines just draw it all together. Great.

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