Wow, this is fun :-), reading. I'm so not involved in LJ I had no idea this stuff was out here. Okay, third hand up, please.
I love what you've put in here about Fontana, making Jack's emotional turmoil over that guy right up front. I honestly hadn't considered how much Jack might know of Fontana's mob connections, but I can see that he could; I can accept that :-). I love it.
Very good. Nice moments interspersed with a touch of angst. :-) <= see smile. Thank you!
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Date: 2006-06-24 04:21 pm (UTC)I love what you've put in here about Fontana, making Jack's emotional turmoil over that guy right up front. I honestly hadn't considered how much Jack might know of Fontana's mob connections, but I can see that he could; I can accept that :-). I love it.
Very good. Nice moments interspersed with a touch of angst. :-) <= see smile. Thank you!